Haiku Moments

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    heavy heart returns
    leaving her behind again
    part of me remains ​
     
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    old remedy blues
    legs cramp to seizures with pain
    all benefit lost​
     
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    sunburned wrists and hands
    red as a freak show can be
    neck prickled with rash​
     
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    Liberals lie
    Apple pie
    Jackass shits
    Snakes doo too
     
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    when we think we're safe
    just one forgotten detail
    subjects us to pain​
     
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    blisters on eyelids
    even when wearing broad brim
    caution did not work​
     
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    even eyeballs sting
    pupils have burning within
    everything itches​
     
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    prayer for henry
    when children relish first blood
    words be not fatal
     
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    prayer for the world
    dear lord take flaming away
    with waters of peace​
     
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    sometimes I wonder
    why some folks operate low
    sans all probity​
     
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